Take A Bow

Review number one

Reviewer: Helen
Name: Riki
Site: Take A Bow
Date: July 2nd 2008

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First impression: My first imression of your site is good, but not great. The layout is kinda messy, and I'm not a big fan of the background either. I like the site name though. It's really nice, and easy to remember, so good job on the site name./ 6 out of 10 points

Enter/Splash page: no Enter/Splash page / 0 out of 10 points

Layout: Your layout is good, but it's not great. Like I said over, it's kinda messy, and it's not a good flow in the pictures/resources. The gray top center picture isn't good blended at all, you can see the line of the picture at the top. I don't like what you did with the colored pictures either, because I can see the background of the layout in her face, and that doesn't look nice. Other than that, your layout is ok, not good - not bad. / 6 out of 10 points

Coding: First of all, I'm glad you're using PHP, because HTML can be really annoying some times. Your css is a bit boring. All of the colors are so light, which makes the css look boring. It would be much better if you had used some strong/dark colours. I like your navigation though. / 6 out of 10 points

Content:
Riki and Take A Bow
It was fun reading about you, but at the same time boring. I mean like, you've written a lot, and I think you could make it a little bit shorter.
I was acutally a bit dassapointed when I entered the site section. Because when I visit a site, one of the things that's fun is to read about the history of the site. Maybe you should write about it ? It would be fun to read.
Resources
Your resources are of really high quality, and you've got a lot of stuff to offer. I really love your animations, they're so cute. Good job on your icons, I really like the coloring on some of them. Your PNG's are nice to, but I think you should make some more, since you haven't got that many. The rest of your resources are good, add some more, and your content will be great.
Myspace
I really like your myspace page, but man, you've only got 2 pages! Which is sad, since they're both really good. But I guess that section is new, so you're probably gonna add a lot more later.
Tutorials
Your tutorials are really easy to read, which is good. Keep on adding them and your tutorial will be fulled with good and helpful tutorials / 9 out of 10 points

Other: Your grammar is good. I don't see a lot of spelling mistakes, which is good. I think you're creative - you make original layouts and original content. Keep it up. / 8 out of 10 points

Summary: It was fun reviewing your site, and I really liked it to. You've got a few things to work on, like your css, more content and your site history. / 35 out of 50 points




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